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story pacing

How Does Timing And Tension Affect Scene Pacing?

A while back, I wrote a post about using sentence function to pace your novel. Today, I want to get into story pacing on a scene-level instead of a sentence-level. There is a weird correlation between your words on the page and the reader’s perceived passage of time, and it’s Read more…

By Liz, 4 monthsFebruary 4, 2025 ago

The 5 Functions Of Sentences In Fiction (And How Knowing This Improves Your Pacing)

The other day, I was flipping through one of my notebooks where I’ve written down author tips. I came across a page that made me stop and go, “Wow, this is awesome!” Which is probably what I thought when I first found the tip and wrote it down. Unfortunately, I Read more…

By Liz, 9 monthsAugust 13, 2024 ago

Balancing Description And Action In A Book Scene (Just 3 Easy Steps)

When you write a scene in your story, it can be hard to balance the description with the action. The readers need to be able to picture the setting and characters, but too much description can make the story feel like it isn’t moving forward. There is a three step Read more…

By Liz, 3 yearsMarch 8, 2022 ago
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